Haha cool experimental vibes.
I feel like the hiphop-break and the normal dnb break sometimes alternate too frequently especially toward the end, but it all depends on if you're trying to make this a dancefloor/mixable tune, or care more about the artistic value of it all.
I might also make the snare crispier/ with more top end. It sounds to me like you boosted a small resonant band of a snare sample (seems incomplete etc).
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