some nice panning, but hat panned too far to left IMO (most noticeable in intro)
interesting combination of sounds. i like it - got that virus style mid bass lick
(i'd love to know how you are making them) but with a more funky flava going on.
there's a bit at 3.43 where the mid range bass comes in way too loud.
i would tinker with the mix, give it a bit more overall compression and
i think the kick & snare could be stronger. i would also pump that distorted break clip a bit more.
it's VERY nearly a VERY good tune IMO. some of the rolls are awesome.
hopefully that's constructive.
DM