Untitled Jump-up WIP. Feedback needed :)!

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  1. prettyherb

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    Yooow,

    Been working on this one the last days.. Tried to do sort of special thing with the vocal-bass (check the drop). I think it's my best track i've made yet, and i want to improve this one as much as possible!

    Feedback would be great!




    enjoy!

    Grtz
     
  2. IV4

    IV4 Currently a newt.

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    Intro is cool. Drop is cool. The mix sounds great on my end. I am enjoying the drum work. Possibly you could use a couple of ghost kicks to and a little funk in your beat. Do something more with you bass. You have some change ups but I think you need more and also think you need to change up the notation with it. Hope this helps.
    Pretty good track.
     
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    Aight txn man, and how do you mean change the notation with it?

    grtz
     
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    IV4 Currently a newt.

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    Change the notes. For example if you play d a b g change it to a g c d. Or even note placement in a bar.
     
  5. EvezDroppin

    EvezDroppin how to change name,......

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    got some really nice production here mate! only thing i feel is letting the tune down a bit is the bass, its not up to the quality of the rest of the rest of the track, split the frequencies, boost it/distort it, try some different OSC types something grittier id like to hear.

    just my 2 cents!