Untitled Jazzy thing

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  1. oversight

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    Hi,

    I've been working on this over the last few days. What do you lot reckon? I'm open to name suggestions btw.



    :)
     
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  2. ApeCat

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    Intro sounds a little bit random, starting with the pianos and then suddenly they're gone, then they're back again.

    Really nice vibes, could do with a few subtle layers of drums to bring in the funk a bit, and a few edits to keep things interesting, some risers, one shots and incidentals and I think you're pretty good.

    Looking forwards to hearing the completed tune!
     
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  3. Sultanare

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    I'm not so big on the reverb on that break (doesn't sound very natural), but besides I really like the idea and vibe on this. You've definitely nailed the jazzy feel.
    Finish it pretty please
     
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    Yea that intro needs a bit of work. At the end there's just the drums, and that feels a bit to empty for my taste.
    I do love the jazzy feel. Real laidback and smooth, as I like my jazz.
    As said above, a bit to much verb on the break, turn that down a bit
     
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  5. oversight

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    nice one guys, appreciate the feedback. Going to try and get it finished this weekend, so I'll report back.
     
  6. oversight

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    Updated version with vocals and stuff

     
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    Those vocals are perfect on that track, where did you found those?!
    Great track, I feel I don't have any issues anymore with the things I previously said. Still loving the track too
     
  8. Sultanare

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    just beautiful man, like the vocals a lot.
    I really want to hear the rest of what's going on in that second drop, those drums are rolling
     
  9. miszt

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    heavy vibes as usual!!


    a suggestion on the snare...vary the tail length a little bit through the phrase; other than that, blissful :D
     
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  10. oversight

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    [MENTION=97126]Crizis[/MENTION] the vocal was recorded round my gaff. It's a friend of mine singing
    [MENTION=91246]Sultanare[/MENTION] Cheers mate :)
    [MENTION=7174]john[/MENTION] nice one dude, thats a good shout actually, will have a look at that. Hope you're well bro
     
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    Track not available. BULLSHITTT!!!!! Send me a pm or something when its done.
     
  12. miszt

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    check the 5th post down ;)
     
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    How embarrassing.
    Sounding so nice. I will come back and leave good feedback.
     
  14. oversight

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    Man that's a beautiful track. smokey jazz room vibes. Music to sit back and just listen to.
     
  16. Northern Seagul

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    very like that song for first seconds of drop. very nice sounding, amazing sub vibes!
    very beatiful tune! I love jazzy styles in dnb and dubstep. This tune is a favorite of many other sounds.
    Great work, thank u.
    Respect :)
     
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    nice one guys, cheers
     
  18. oversight

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    nice one dude :)