untitled beat

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Labrat, Sep 23, 2009.

  1. Labrat

    Labrat Active Member

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    Its unfinished but i wanted some feedback on it.
    Its deffinatly the best production ive made however it sounded better while i was making it then it does now when i listen to it.

    Feedback would be great.

    http://soundcloud.com/figurative/untitled-beat-2

    thanks
     
  2. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Tis a very mellow, liquid style track. Makes me want to just kick back and chill. Cant really offer you much help as I'm pretty new around here, and to producing in general. But one thing I could say, is that I personally think the hi hats are a little too tinny. Maybe take them down an octave, see how they sound?
     
  3. Labrat

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    i will keep it in mind when going over the track again, thanks
     
  4. groelle

    groelle Well-Known Member

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    the actual breakdown isnt as good yet, as is the arrangement. think you should still work on that. and maybe add some more fx. apart from that its a cool tune, mellow and relaxed, as already said. i like it!

    i actually like the hats, fitting nicely.
     
  5. Labrat

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    thanks a lot, nice to know its not complete rubbish
     
  6. msmith222

    msmith222 redbeard

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    not rubbish at all. the intro is nice, musical...fx are good. the drums are really mellow, the bass has a good sound. i like it, but it does sound a little bare. i also think the hats are nice, would worry about them too much. definitely could use variety in the bass/melody, but this is a solid idea, you should see it through for sure!
     
  7. Labrat

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