unfinished track by k00ma

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Ilju^, Jun 11, 2010.

  1. Ilju^

    Ilju^ Member

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    ok I'm in need of how I should continue this tune, I've had this brain fart for a long time and just can't figure out how to continue after first drop. me needs help. Intro need a bit tweaking that I can handle.

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/771259125f8e12ba/

    aaand... sorry if I've broke some forum rules, feel free to move this someplace else if case is so. lidl drunk now. cya
     
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  2. unknownelementz

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    nice tune i like it!!!!! bit of eq issues, i.e tht synth noise, builds up nicely, drums cud b mre powerful, i dont think u need t do loads mre to the arrangement of the tune, mayb jus make a few different tweaks, so that the synth changes slightly, but nothing drastic, i think its a well layed out tune, jus try and sort a few mixdwn issues out, make sure nothin is clippin n so forth!

    big up!!
    pzx
     
  3. Acune

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    very nice, feels like a soundtrack for unreal tournament or something like that :D.
    arrangement is ok for me so far, the snare sounds a bit if it's clipping or distorted somehow.. don't like that..
    i would continue the track with taking the subs out of the mix and introducing a strings melody, maybe reducing the drums for a while.. then maybe a paddy breakdown.. and a second drop with everything combined.. could be too liquid for that track though ^^