Underspawn - Window World

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by underspawn, Feb 28, 2012.

  1. underspawn

    underspawn Headz Roll

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    Finally managed to finish a tune. I'm not so happy with it but decided to share it anyways :D


    Any feedback good or bad is welcome
    Cheers
     
    Last edited: Feb 29, 2012
  2. lostnthesound

    lostnthesound Burns Easily in the Sun

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    Nice bit of soul in that track. I like the chilled vibe, and the drums fit nicely into the mix.

    If I had to make a suggestion, there seems to be a pad or some type of atmospheric chord that plays throughout the track. I think it fits nicely, but at times it drowns out the other instruments such as the horns early on in the track. Perhaps add some automation (volume or filter) so that the pad attenuates a bit when the other sounds are present. This will help clean the mix a bit.

    All in all, not a bad track.
     
  3. underspawn

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    Cheers man, will try that and see how it sounds
     
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    I like this one!

    Really chill and sexy track mate! May I get this for free? :teeth:
     
  6. underspawn

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    Haha, sure mate. Will send u 320 tomorrow, going to bed now. Cheers!
     
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    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Really love that pad in the intro man, Oh mate, those vocals fit beautifully into this style of track.......such a laid back, mellow vibe. And I'm really feelin those little jazzy riffs.

    Awesome work mate
     
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