Underspawn - Sycamore

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by underspawn, May 18, 2011.

  1. underspawn

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    Here goes nothing.


    Any feedback appreciated,

    Cheers!
     
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    Drums need bringing out more on this. Other elements drown them out a little too much.
    Keys and patterns are quite nice, but I'd consider adding some FX to them, they're a little too 'clean' for my liking.
    Good start though man, deffinately one to keep working on.
     
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    Cheers mate! I'm still working on the drums, can't get them to sound as i want to but am tryin =d
     
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    Piano sound is way too dry, and loud. Try layering that break with some one shot hits of kicks and snares to make it more punchy. Bass could do with coming up a couple of db too. That piano is way too prominent in the mix, it just draws attention away from everything else. It also goes on for too long. Less is more sometimes, try having it hit on every 16 bars only or something. Gets too monotonous as it is.

    Keep at it though mate
     
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    Thanks, will definitely work on wat u said.
     
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    Dont feel the piano at all man;P sounds abit like kid playing with a toy piano. and ye pretty much what Fletch said
     
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    Made some slight changes.
     
  9. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    bass is sounding nice drums too but they need to be brought out in the mix more
    agree with fishy on the keys tho not really feelin them
    good work tho just a few changes an itll be sounding proper nice