Underspawn - Stop The Feelin WIP

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by underspawn, Dec 24, 2011.

  1. underspawn

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    The tune im currently working on:

    All feedback is highly appreciated. Oh, and pls tell me if u think something is out of key :respekt:

    Also, merry Christmas to everyone :) !
     
  2. Boycot

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    Nice laidback vibes bro, but drop the vocals _ or pitch 'm a litlle bit. Doesn't really glue the tune. There are also some (not suiting) background noises in there, they don't float my boat.

    Keep it up!
     
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    same here, some background noises sound a bit out of place.
    They make it hard to really enjoy this track.
     
  4. underspawn

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    Cheers for the feedback guys, rly appreciated, but could u be more specific about the background noises, which ones sound out of place to u(tho i have a guess :D)?
     
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    Haha bro, I reckon everything is out of key, but you could just tell me it was jazz and that might fix it. Really tho, I think you did well to make everything that out of tune. If you get it all pitched right there might be a tune in it for ya
     
  6. underspawn

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    Ookay, this means its about time i stop ignoring music theory. Thanks for the feedback.