Underspawn - Days without you CLIP, feedback needed

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by underspawn, Sep 6, 2011.

  1. underspawn

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    Heres something new im working on:



    Any feedback is appreciated cuz im rly tired by the huge difference between the sound from my speakers and the one from my headphones, which both suck. I'd be really thankful if someone with proper monitors can tell me whats going on with the mixdown
     
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    nice sounds goin on. like the bass and samples but levels aren't right over all.
    I think drums need beefin up. more riddims and filters.
     
  3. underspawn

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    Thanks for the feedback, those r the things i struggle with most, the drums and the levels ;d I dropped the levels to 0 and raised them again, think it sounds a little better now
     
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    Nice sounds overall, but needs more percussion elements I think. Try adding another hi hat, but quiter than the main one, with some subtle delay on it, to give it a bit more shuffle. And maybe another snare, with the same, quiter and slight delay.
     
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    Nice vibe going on,but imo def needs bit more percussion to keep it rollin along and would highlight the different sections better,reckon this would really bring it to life!
     
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    Cheers guys, will definitely add more percussion