Ultra & Tremah - Far From Home

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by st420, Mar 4, 2013.

  1. st420

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    new collab from me and a dude called tremah.

    criticism encouraged. :)

     
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    Nice tune, drums sound good but I think that bass needs to be bigger/fatter.

    Also I think this tune is crying out for a vocal sample, that would really bring it together!
     
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    Really nice tight tune! I agree with Mr Meh, bass could maybe be a bit louder and beefier. Also agree that a nice vocal sample could really add a nice aspect to this tune!

    Nice work overall! Enjoyed it! :)
     
  4. st420

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    Thanks guys, got plenty of room ill turn the bass up, only got headphones and I know they usually flatter the bass so I try to compensate :) would love to have a vocal sample too but where to find a good one I don't know!
     
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    nice tune...love the circling synths, and swelling vocal pads. drums are nice too. The wobble bass could be beefier, maybe with some distortion, unison...or another bass synth (maybe pitched down an octave) layered behind it wobbling in the same way. a vocal would be good as well, like someone mentioned above.

     
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    I dont dig the wobble very much, but solid work there. I like the drums very much:D
     
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    Deeks Mcgee Team Audio Criminal

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    Nice tune mate. There is nothing much I can say that hasn't been said by other people in the thread. Keep it up. :)
     
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    Thanks guys, got an improved version in the works ill post it up soon :)