Drum & Bass tyDi - Live this Lie feat. Carmen Keigans Drum and Bass Remix

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Dark Lizardro, Dec 30, 2013.

  1. Dark Lizardro

    Dark Lizardro The Lizard that has a hammer Tribal Leader VIP Junglist

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    Ok, people! My last thread didn't get far (nobody took the time to actually listen to the song, I believe), but I'm ok with it.

    Anways, here's the track that I uploaded to the god damn contest. It's a dnb remix of a trance song, so you may expect something a little more happy that I'm supposed to be doing.

    Cheers!

     
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    I find that simple drum patterns, with good drum sounds, sound better than more complex drum patterns with lesser sounds, thats my only thing im not to keen on.
     
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    The intro is nice. I think one of your kicks should be a ghost kick to give a better rolling sound. At about 2:20 the song just kind of changes. It goes into a bass solo. I feel the transition needs work to give a clear distinction between parts. In fact I feel all of your transitions need work. Also when the bass comes in at 2:20 the top end sounds rather mono. Some parallel processing and stereo field widening would be useful.
    For the rest of the track, FX sounds that have the question - answer effect can really help tie a track together as back ground noise, or if worked properly, a main part of the mix.
    Overall, it sounds like your mixing and track engineering is competent, but the details of the track are lacking. I have the same problem. Hope this helps.
     
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    Thanks on the feedback, man! I recognize I have some struggling when it comes to transitions. I guess it's just part of the trial and error, and learning curve we all have tio pass through.

    Thanks, again, on the top end advices. I do have these feelings that my tracks lack some top end stereo, and the basses are soloing. I'm just trying to get better at this.

    thanks, mate!