Two Tunes

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by obscure, Sep 7, 2015.

  1. obscure

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    Hey, Been making music for 12 years. Back online after a long break. Let me know what you think. Thanks.

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    Bedroom Eyes

     
  2. Solace

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    12 years? that's a whole while!
    First thing I noticed, why fade in the drums in the intro? Sounded a bit awkward.
    Tune itself is topnotch.
    The vocals are awesome and the bass rolls nicely
    Just the mixdown is a bit wonky. The kick gets lost in there. The high end could get a boost and the bass is a bit too loud. Vocal can be louder and that delayed/reverbed stabby thing a bit too loud.
    After a while the drums get a bit to samey too though.. Change em up once in a while



    Oh I just noticed the second tune. I though it was in you signature.
    I still feel the mixdown is a bit weird on that, the bass is alright, the drums don't cut thought enough, and I feel the background noises are too loud as well..
     
  3. obscure

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    Cheers pal, Had a long break, Just starting to relick the last tunes I was on, And starting new ones at the mo. Thanks for the feedback mate. :]