Turn Signal on soundcloud

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by msmith222, Oct 22, 2009.

  1. msmith222

    msmith222 redbeard

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    sorry to repost a track, but this is finished now (or maybe i should say as far as i am gonna take it). my buddy that i started producing with is coming to town for a few days only, and since i don't get a lot of time, i'm finished screwing with this...

    http://soundcloud.com/msmith222/turn-signal

    as usual, any thoughts appreciated!
     
  2. subprime

    subprime Dysjoint

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    Listening on headphones and laptop, but it sounds good production wise from what I can hear. Polished even. Seems finished to me.
    Nice one.
     
  3. msmith222

    msmith222 redbeard

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    thanks man, appreciate the listen
     
  4. Code:Red

    Code:Red Defiant

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    When you uploaded this a few days ago i was definitely feeling this tune, loving the vibes and everything! Well done man!
     
  5. RAIL (Coulter)

    RAIL (Coulter) Coulter Rail

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    I can find nothing to tweek. This is a very solid tune man.
     
  6. druu

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    Nice tune man, decent arrangement, etc. but to my ears it sounds rather dry. Maybe add some slight reverb or delay to that lead synth sound and the other sounds? give them more space and dominance.

    The snare doesn't cut it for me, gives a more industrial feel to the track when it's not. Try cut some bottom end off it and layer with a splashier one?

    Otherwise great tune. :)
     
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    msmith222 redbeard

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    loving the feedback guys. i am always happy to hear how others would change my tunes - and of course i am quite content to listen to you all pat me on the back too:)
     
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    luciduk Active Member

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    definatly a baad tune!

    its a tune to be proud of mate, its got that liquid flow down.

    i was feeling good about the beat at the start but then when it dropped with the bass line i hav to agree with druu... the snare isnt the right one for me, sorry man...

    i would say its a very metallic snare you have where as i would go for something more wooden, it would change the whole sound of the tune... uve sorted the rest of the beat down to a t, the breaks are perfect and the drum fills are badman. so i believe this final step is just down to personal preference
     
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    msmith222 redbeard

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    appreciate the listen. always good to hear when people agree on criticism, helps narrow down the focus of adjusting things...
     
  11. DNBusa

    DNBusa PROOF IS N THE PRODUCTION

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    hell yea man good stuff like the synth or pad or whatever its nice got a good vibe to it i love playing tunes like this you did a really good job on this one. like when it drops down in tone sick man good dancefloor shaker
    great sound man big ups