Tune

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Gruffsnuff, Mar 12, 2014.

  1. Gruffsnuff

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    https://soundcloud.com/gruffsnuff/killatron hey guys thought i would share this with you as this is the first track i have made everything all synths and drum patterns please comment it would be great to hear from you :) :derp:

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  2. Gruffsnuff

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    Anyone got any feedback?
     
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    Come on guys I don't care if you hate just give me some feedback

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    not the way to go to get feedback mate
     
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    Thanks for the feedback on me asking for feedback ;) how do you suggest i get people to comment :)
     
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    Hey man, I like the sounds, the background swells are pretty nice. I think the drums could do with a bit more life though, they feel a bit too mechanical and stiff. Maybe some reverb and a bit of beat variation? those high hat&percussion sounds are rather nice so stick with that. I feel that this track might benefit from an extra bass in there. You got the sub and then you got some highs, but i think a low/mid sort of thing might feel it out a bit more, guess it depends what your are going for.
     
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    Thanks this is great feedback I will play with drums a bit more see what I come up with. Not sure about another high end bass sound as I don't wanna complicate it but I am trying hard to put more variations in my tunes so I will give it a go.

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    The synth in the intro isn't doing it... either needs to be layered or reworked. While the guitar riff is quite nice at first it gets a bit too repetetive. Don't like the choice of riser, a different one would sound better. I'd say the strength of this track is the bass. Also a bit lazy with the part after 2:55; it's almost the exact copy of the 1st part.
     
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    Thanks mate really helpful I really want to make my stuff sound interesting. I agree it gets repetitive I will work harder on my next one :)

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