[tune] work in progress

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by thin king, Dec 18, 2008.

  1. thin king

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    I'll check it out on ma dinner break.
     
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    for some reason it says its gunna take 27 mins to download. erm how bloody long is it.

    will try again later.
     
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    eh - its only 9mb??? shouldn't be more than a minute??
     
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    okokok,

    i like it,

    infact, dunno if ur intentions but with the opening pianos , it kinda has a chistmassy edge to it, possibly a xmas numba 1?

    Ez
     
  7. thin king

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    ha ha - not really but I'd go for it.... better then blimmin xfactor!!!
     
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    dump......I mean bump :)
     
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    DubC Close your ears!

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    Really bouncy drums man, also like the idea of the pianos, they're real clean. Amens are nice and mellow too, and suit the tune. I think some bongo sorta sound would go nice as another layer over the top of what you've already got, or something off beat to the cymbals to pad it out a bit more. The snare is lacking a bit of umph, if you know what I mean, chuck a different snare in here and there, and maybe put some reverb on like the last snare in every 32 beats or summin. I'd add another bassdrum too. =D

    These are just ideas man, not really critisizm 'cause the tune is really nice. Keep at it, got some good ideas here. :gang_bang
     
  10. thin king

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    I like your thinking - some good ideas there some of which I hadn't thought of, cheers for the listen!! :)