[TUNE WIP] butterscotch - lucid

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by luciduk, Jan 13, 2010.

  1. luciduk

    luciduk Active Member

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    http://soundcloud.com/lucid_uk/butterscotch

    some kind of roller... startd last night

    boring? poor mixdown? share your thoughts..

    im having real trouble making intros for my beats hence this isnt finished if anybody could help or suggest anything thatd be great
     
  2. subprime

    subprime Dysjoint

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    That's a nice little tune. Started last night eh? Not bad. I like the space.
    It's just rolling along nicely at the minute. Room for a few tweaks I guess.
     
  3. Protoplasym

    Protoplasym Nuskool

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    Listening on some Logitech comp speaks and this sounds spot on... everything has it's own space in the mix.

    The Perc is jamming, very chunky and very playful.
    The Techy Bass layers are genius imo... if I were you, I'd have a blast doing some edits on them half way through the track... just to switch it up a bit.

    I wonder what some big airy Pads and Leadwork (of any kind) would sound like on top of this.


    :postitwhenit'sdone!:
     
  4. groelle

    groelle Well-Known Member

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    id make the kick and snare more powerful. but as said, the bass sounds, glitches and stabs are spot on. and boost the sub! :D

    really only needs some tweaking and variation tho. good work!
     
  5. luciduk

    luciduk Active Member

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    thanks for your words guys... really appretiate you taking the time.

    will take it all into consideration... and hopefully post a final piece!




    edit: bass variation is definatly needed ... and some more cymbal layers and pads etc...
     
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