[TUNE] The Clipper

MARKLAR

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not to keen on the intro!
the beats are gettin better! fo sho
cool tune needs a bit of work on sum of the bass tones.
overall tis a good tune jus needs abit of work!
biggup!
 

P!ker

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Its sounding good mate, the intro definately needs some work and the beat needs to punch through a bit more when it has kicked off but other than that it sounds sick mate.
Keep working on it and it will sound wicked.
PEACE!
 

thin king

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not bad matey, the overall sound is way too mid though, you have no top end and I can't hear a sub there - these too things alone would make the tune sound a bit tame plus if you sit your kick on a sub and then layer a bass above your kick it makes the lower end sound nice and clear but heavier (give it a go) as opposed to trying to have sub and upper bass in one sound (this rarely works and gets muddy with the kick frequency's - look in to low passing and notch eq'in)). Plus it sounds a bit central too - try abit of chorus on some of your sounds - instant width!!! keep it up though it rolls pretty good but needs to feel bigger :)
 

logikz

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yeah make it lower and grimier. youre doing well though, i really like b-movie samples and your beats are techy. bass synths are too clean so as i said more lower and grimier.
 
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