[TUNE] The Clipper

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Viperdnb, Oct 5, 2008.

  1. Viperdnb

    Viperdnb On his way.

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    New tune!
    Worked hard on getting the snare sounding better, please have a listen and criticize.
    Safe (y).

    CLICK HERE PLZ

    Or on my myspace too :D

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    Please if you've taken the time to click on the topic, can you give a little feedback!
    Every little helps XD
     
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  2. Viperdnb

    Viperdnb On his way.

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    Fuck it.
     
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    im no expert but i liked it,thanks for upload
     
  5. Viperdnb

    Viperdnb On his way.

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    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    not to keen on the intro!
    the beats are gettin better! fo sho
    cool tune needs a bit of work on sum of the bass tones.
    overall tis a good tune jus needs abit of work!
    biggup!
     
  7. intafuze

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    yeah man nice idea here, little bit of work and you got a smasher, id play this on my radio show for sure!!
     
  8. Viperdnb

    Viperdnb On his way.

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    wow really??
    thanks mate :D
     
  9. P!ker

    P!ker Astrobass Recordingz HQ

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    Its sounding good mate, the intro definately needs some work and the beat needs to punch through a bit more when it has kicked off but other than that it sounds sick mate.
    Keep working on it and it will sound wicked.
    PEACE!
     
  10. thin king

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    not bad matey, the overall sound is way too mid though, you have no top end and I can't hear a sub there - these too things alone would make the tune sound a bit tame plus if you sit your kick on a sub and then layer a bass above your kick it makes the lower end sound nice and clear but heavier (give it a go) as opposed to trying to have sub and upper bass in one sound (this rarely works and gets muddy with the kick frequency's - look in to low passing and notch eq'in)). Plus it sounds a bit central too - try abit of chorus on some of your sounds - instant width!!! keep it up though it rolls pretty good but needs to feel bigger :)
     
  11. logikz

    logikz I Am Not The King Staff Member

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    yeah make it lower and grimier. youre doing well though, i really like b-movie samples and your beats are techy. bass synths are too clean so as i said more lower and grimier.