Feelin this tune dude. My main critique would be to vary up the structure of the "main section" of the song -- it seems repetitive at times! So maybe have more breaks and fade out things (just an idea!), and perhaps additional layers and melodic progression throughout the song.
So deep feeling though. I can hear your influences come through on this one (saw who you follow on soundcloud). Haha I actually think we have related sounds -- I just posted a thread with a new tune (under the name Kiazma).