[Tune] Tell me

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by dontcallcook, Sep 30, 2011.

  1. dontcallcook

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    DAMN!
    Feelin this tune dude. My main critique would be to vary up the structure of the "main section" of the song -- it seems repetitive at times! So maybe have more breaks and fade out things (just an idea!), and perhaps additional layers and melodic progression throughout the song.

    So deep feeling though. I can hear your influences come through on this one (saw who you follow on soundcloud). Haha I actually think we have related sounds -- I just posted a thread with a new tune (under the name Kiazma).
     
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    sound! ye thought it might be too repetitive, i've listened to it so much now its hard to look at it critically. ahh sweet, i'll take a listen to your tune when i get home :)
     
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    Wow, that's the kinda song that'll make me feel a lot higher than I actually am. Nothing about it is abrasive, an amazing accomplishment even for "chill" DnB these days.
     
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    Big ups mate this is amazing work so relaxing,maybe little bit repetitive but it is ok,all in all great tune.