[tune] sweet dreams remix (breakz)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by tarranjoe, Nov 11, 2007.

  1. tarranjoe

    tarranjoe Active Member

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    i posted this in production first without seeing the sub-forum. i don't know if i'll get slated for posting a breaks tune but i thought i'd branch out to a few more genres and thought breakz was a good start. this tune is not finished and the bass levels at the second drop are too high but i want to know if the first droipm sounds alright or if there's too much. and other critisism (consrtuctive please) is muchly appreciated, cheers

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  2. glenemy

    glenemy Enemy is here

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    I think this tunes alright, and I thing it all work's well together and flow's nice, I personaly don't think the bass level's where to high at the second drop either, keep it up an respect
     
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    cheers man, i wasn't sure if anyone would reply to a breakz tune
     
  4. jay walker

    jay walker 1/2 of Passive/Aggressive

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    Nice reproduction of the melodys of the orginal, pretty cool track.

    Dont know about the glitchy effects tho, it gets a bit too much after a while.

    Drums need beefing up as well, unless you were actually going for an electro-esque style.

    good variation to it tho, 2nd breakdowns cool, the levels just need sorting
     
  5. tarranjoe

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    cheers man, thanks for takin the time to listen