Tune - Stay With Me - The thinKING

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by thin king, Jul 6, 2009.

  1. thin king

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    http://soundcloud.com/thin-king/stay-with-me

    probably not quite finished yet but not far off! its a drum and bass love song :sadbana: - kinda deep but not too much.....anyways have a listen and let me know what you think!!

    Cheers
     
  2. krease

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    lik it mate, love the piano thing u got going on.

    big ups
     
  3. thin king

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    cheers fella - I've really worked hard on this tune to make it as musical as possible but still keeping the energy. I'm still learning piano at the moment can't recommend it enough :)
     
  4. Kibon

    Kibon Blaze It Down !

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    sounds great man ! the only thing I would do is use a bit of a deeper bassline( but that's personal preference).. but this is quality already !
     
  5. thin king

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    cheers Kibon I appreciate the listen and the feedback
     
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    I love the way you've used the vocal. Really good tune. Came across as kinda subtle well crafted.
    Like it.
     
  7. thin king

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    cheers subprime I'm really chuffed you've said that - cos thats exactly what I was going for - a kinda of Klute style tune to make you notice things a bit more but still having a kind of epic feel - obviously its not a patch on anything the big mans done but still its a step in the right direction I hope.
     
  8. thin king

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    cheeky little .................bump
     
  9. kama

    kama benkama.net

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    Real nice track. I do agree that the bass could work with some more action in the first half.

    Really crisp production fwiw.
     
  10. thin king

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    cheers for the listen kama - always appreciate your comments - can you expand a bit on what you meant by more action in the bass and what does fwiw stand for..........please excuse my ignorance!!
     
  11. kama

    kama benkama.net

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    hehe ok

    action in the bass - like the hoover thing you introduce to the track at some point. The bass before that is too slow paced to me.

    FWIW = For What It's Worth. nothing important eh
     
  12. thin king

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    oh I see what you mean - well I kinda did that on purpose as I wanted to show a bit of progression in the tune - thanks for the feedback though Kama - I see your tune is getting some well deserved love - nice one.