hmm its not bad. i like the lead, but its too quiet in the mix in the first section. the bassdrum dominates the mix. maybe have a bassline with less mid like some low end wobble, so the lead comes out. could pitch those drums up a tad too. add a breakdown and a nice drop . i dont know if you want to go for a bit more overall compression but yeh water shadow is much nicer on the whole i think. hope this helps!