[TUNE] Judgement Day

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  1. Viperdnb

    Viperdnb On his way.

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    New tune on my myspace called Judgement Day, please listen and criticism is welcome very much.
    (www.myspace.com/viperdnb)
    :jackson::jackson::jackson::jackson:
     
  2. daz_hunt

    daz_hunt daz_hunt

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    ez mate, just listnin now. - The intro sounds pretty simple and the drums sound flat, the intro is 2 long 4 my tastes but thats just me - but when it does drop i see that all u have done is taken The force's - Welcome 2 earth track and sampled, sliced and arranged!
    u havent done much else as far as i can hear, u should be concentrating on making ur own sounds, rather than taking them from existing tunes!!
    Daz
     
  3. Barnzee

    Barnzee OmniaInNumerisSitaSunt

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    daz hunt, rhymes well with... Tunes a good effort bro, i like it anyway. :)
     
  4. daz_hunt

    daz_hunt daz_hunt

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    i didnt say i didnt like it but u cant expect me 2 give a good reveiw if its not his really all his work!
     
  5. Viperdnb

    Viperdnb On his way.

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    Sorry, I don't know how to really make my own bass sound that good, so I used samples... I didn't realize people were against that sort of thing... Is it illegal or something?
    I don't want to be ripping off good artist's such as The Force.

    Sorry again.:|
     
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    daz_hunt daz_hunt

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    i dont know whether its illegal or not tbh - but if ur gonna put urself out there, its gotta be all ur work - theres plenty of good tutorials around, theres a few on you tube, check em out!
     
  7. Viperdnb

    Viperdnb On his way.

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    Yeah but I doubt for the program I use...
    What if I manipulate the sound and resample it and add more tracks to it then resample and so on... would that be acceptable... ?
     
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    just listened and i think its the open hat (excuse if not i'm only simple) was a bit heavy but over than that nice. Listen to the annihilating rythm and liked that tremendo.
     
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    charliemcp i start fires

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    it aint illegal m8 loads of producers do it, bit cheeky is all. tunes sounding gd though, might wanna shorten the intro to 32 or 64 bars though? give the kick more punch too, bass is fucking sick bruv, stolen or not
     
  10. Fratanize

    Fratanize Keepin the jungle alive

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    not heard the original so cant comment on that. I like the idea. Thought the whole thing lacked bass.
    Nice work fella
     
  11. Viperdnb

    Viperdnb On his way.

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    http://www.myspace.com/theforcednb

    The samples i used for bass are on a track called "welcome to earth" by "the force", but i extended the second one to loop at the end.

    *the shame*

    Could someone link me to some tutorials on making heavy bass?
    Would be appreciated, thanks :)
     
  12. Fratanize

    Fratanize Keepin the jungle alive

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    what sequencer are you using?
     
  13. co0ke

    co0ke windowlicker

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    a very fun tune!
     
  14. daz_hunt

    daz_hunt daz_hunt

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    Viperdnb On his way.

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    The sequencer I use is called renoise...
    It's not too well known I don't think, thanks for the help. :)
     
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    Fratanize Keepin the jungle alive

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    not heard of that one. sorry pal can't offer any help
     
  17. daz_hunt

    daz_hunt daz_hunt

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    vickvega Mr. Blonde

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    hit me up man and ill send you a link to some samples of heavy bass
     
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    Viperdnb On his way.

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    vickvega Mr. Blonde

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    no worries bro