Tune in Progress =]

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by CH3SH, Nov 25, 2009.

  1. CH3SH

    CH3SH CH3SH - Naphalm Audio

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    *One for all you Tech-DnB lovers*
    Jus wanna get an outlook from anyone wanting a kwik listen
    Me and Choon at Naphalm sat down and colab'd for a day and came up witha a lil structured frame to dress up =]
    Thanks in advance =P

    **Since yesterday it has been updated with a fair bit more, tell us what you think**

    http://soundcloud.com/ch3sh-na/macho-workings-1-1
     
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    TongueFlap Flappin'

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    just listening :)

    sounds like your drums are clipping on the drop..
    ummm the drop is kinda lacking in music isint it, sounds a bit too 'industrial' imo :/
     
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    CH3SH CH3SH - Naphalm Audio

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    Its an industrial track indeed,
    Just what we were after =]
    Though its only framework
    Yeah your right they are clipping,
    But dont worry its all basic framework =D
     
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    TongueFlap Flappin'

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    ah right, well if ur going for the industrial sounds then carry on :)


    yeh man sort out the clippage :D
     
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    CH3SH CH3SH - Naphalm Audio

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    Zeal Ohm/C2D/Dark Asylum/Ennex

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    Locked............

    Intro sounds a little bare atm to me, sounds like a one shot synth and some filtered drums.

    actually like the drums on the drop, i think the bass needs to come up. It could also be more raspy gritty sounding.

    Drums cutting in nice man, i think the rest of the tune needs to come up to their standard

    good start man keep working it
     
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    CH3SH CH3SH - Naphalm Audio

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    Thanks for the reply =]
    Yeah the intro is quite bare, kinda to brace yourself for whats to come when it drops, It is mainly how youve listed it too lol a synth thrown into some effects with some filtered drums lol
    Must admit the raspy bass is jus to add a little frequency filling which is mainly driven with the sub, though between you and me i think ive cut off too much off the sub freq range lol
    The tune is mainly drums orientated so the whole drums cutting nice is a big plus for me man thanks loads
    And thanks to all who have clicked and listened
    Agreed it may not be everyones cuppa tea =P
     
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    like the sounds of this, specially the little reverse sample at one of the drops. seems like it needs a bit more by way of bassline etc but as a framework/intro is all good!
     
  9. vickvega

    vickvega Mr. Blonde

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    yo bro-havent seen you about for a bit
    digin drums on this one man-looking forward to the finished project
     
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    CH3SH CH3SH - Naphalm Audio

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    Ello buddy =]
    Yeah havent been around for a while,
    After my system crashed again i decided to jus upgrade everything,
    ATM looking into purchasing a midi keybo =]