[tune] greenway - critique?

[eski-b]

a new tune of mine

let us know what u think

http://soundcloud.com/eski-b/greenway

 

[Neural Tech]

hi, i've got 6 posts

 

[eski-b]

?????

 

[luciduk]

lack of feedback i think...

i like the glitchy noises.. track needs more variation and some percussion

 

[Mr Fletch]

I think what ol Protoplasym is trying to say there, is dont just post a track up here expecting feedback if you dont bother taking the time to give your own feedback on others tracks.

Big give and take world my friend!

 

[subprime]

This track just ambles along ambiently. Second half seemed pretty much a copy and paste of the first. Coulda changed it up bit?