[tune] greenway - critique?

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by eski-b, Jan 22, 2010.

  1. eski-b

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  2. Protoplasym

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    hi, i've got 6 posts


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  3. eski-b

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    lack of feedback i think...

    i like the glitchy noises.. track needs more variation and some percussion
     
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    I think what ol Protoplasym is trying to say there, is dont just post a track up here expecting feedback if you dont bother taking the time to give your own feedback on others tracks.

    Big give and take world my friend!
     
  6. subprime

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    This track just ambles along ambiently. Second half seemed pretty much a copy and paste of the first. Coulda changed it up bit?