I listened to another one of yours just recently. Cant remember which one but some peeps said it was over compressed... That was ace also.
Now this one, is good but the vocal in the intro puts me off quite far. It's too cheesy as someone already said. Maybe you could play with it, make it more full, stereo effecting, mad delays, filters, chopping, stuttering, vocoding and all that.
The stutters in the middle (synth sound) however, sound really interesting.
The vocal ruins it for me. Not completely, but it sounds like some other tune is coming in on top of your track in a mix. The synthwork surrounding it deserve something so much special. The rest is pure cotton tho.