TRYPZ - Paranormal Nightmare

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Tryptomatik, Dec 8, 2009.

  1. Tryptomatik

    Tryptomatik LiquidGroove

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  2. Zeal

    Zeal Ohm/C2D/Dark Asylum/Ennex

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    intro is ok, drops in ok

    Mix wise, kick n snare need sorting, they arent clear enough. track sounds like it might have been pushed thorugh limiter too much, as the basses are really upfront but the kick n snare are right back

    Tbh as far as jump up goes its not that bad i hear alot worse all the time, but not my thing at all style wise

    Id say work on the mix the tune isnst bad man, get the kick n snare cutting in nicely :)
     
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    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Zeal pretty much hit the nail on the head.

    As an overall track it's got good potential, but you need to work on the mixdown, the kick and snare definately need to sound crisper. I'd also maybe layer a sub bass underneath the gritty growl bass to give it a bit more oomph!

    Overall though, good layout.
     
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    I like quite a lot about that. Sounds like you made a good bassline and put it a bit high in the mix. Still, sounds ok man.
    Another vote for 'play around with the mixdown'
     
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    Page doesn't pull up....


    :confused:
     
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    Protoplasym Nuskool

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    Prod on the Perc sounds spot on... intro is perfect!

    Mmmmmm, the Bass is rocking hard!!

    Nasty and Techy = :melikey:


    1:17 - I was expecting something big to crash there on that one, a cymbal with some verb or a big filtered sweep pad stab, something epic..?..

    Around the 2:13 mark, I think it's good you added a couple more notes to the Bline, but imo; it's not enough. There are some wicked possibilities to be had with that Bline.

    Oh wow, the Brkdwn is ruthless! Love that vocal sample and Padwork. Terrific build into the one, but again, I feel like the Bline could be doing a lot more.


    What you've done with the Bass rocks, it's just that I'd go a lil more nuts with it if I had that audio in my hands.

    The Prod overall is fantastic, loud and crisp.



    :keepjamming:
     
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    Tryptomatik LiquidGroove

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    thanks alot for the feedback mate it was perfect just what i was looking for :) glad you enjoyed the track i always end up going back to my tunes a few months later and tweaking them so ill work on what youve reccomended!
     
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    Protoplasym Nuskool

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    Cool beans... in all honesty, the track is done... it's just that we all have our own ideas when it comes to doing improv on someone elses riffs :D... you know..


    Keep jamming!
     
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