trying production again, WIP.

[st420]

something i started today. just looking for some feedback on what its like so far

https://soundcloud.com/struan%2Fwip-apoptosis

 

[miszt]

you are heading in the right direction, nice wobbly bass, the overall mixdown is lacking punch, get the drums big and punchy, vary the bassline up some more (for eg that bit coming into the drop wuld work nice in the track) and eq it to its tight with the percussion

 

[st420]

thanks for commenting mate!

 

[instinktmusic]

the drop and the intro should be seperated a bit, and the bassline needs to be dirtier and add some fills in i'm liking that intro though, good work

 

[marcelkennard]

Yeah mate I really like the style and the overall, would sound alot sicker on the drop if the drums were a bit louder and punchier and possibly sidechained to the bass some more
check out my new track if you get the chance
http://dnbforum.com/showthread.php?123857-Mantis-No-Good-(Re-Up)

 

[st420]

thanks for checking out and commenting, really appreciate it. will check out your tunes now

 

[DjSammy-T]

Yeh I'm with these guys really. The track has potential but lacks in a few places. When the track drops it doesn't seem to change to much from the intro. Beef up the drums maybe force the high end on the wobble a little bit. Mainly your drums though work on them and you should be golden

 

[underspawn]

Basically what the others said, the intro is lovely. The drums too, they just need to hit harder. And the bass works for me.

Cheers!

 

[st420]

thanks mate. i actually always struggle intros glad to know this ones alright

 

[st420]

while trying to dirty up the bass sound the tune kind of evolved into this. comments appreciated. will happily check out any of your tune in return

https://soundcloud.com/struan%2Ftest-bounce3