Trawler - Whole (clip)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by subprime, Aug 3, 2011.

  1. subprime

    subprime Dysjoint

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    Haha another one from today, just a clip this time.

    Mixdown and sound quality seem to be my problem so any feedback about that is what I'm looking for.
     
  2. IV4

    IV4 Currently a newt.

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    I would tell you what to do. If "Mixdown and sound quality seem to be my problem" was not always my problem too. I then could give you better advice.
    So insted I just going to comment on how much I like that pad and lead mix together.
     
  3. greyson

    greyson VERBAL CITY

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    i think this track is not bad. really great beat. but i think it's too simple.
     
  4. subprime

    subprime Dysjoint

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    Yeah it's just a start. I want to keep things simple at the minute and try and improve the basics, get some feedback and work out where I'm going wrong! Cheers for listening.
     
  5. Freek

    Freek Lets get freeeeeeky

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    nice tune man, really like the atmos/pads. are u bringin ur tracks right down when u mix down? it seems a bit distorted overall which could be caused by doin ur mixdown too loud, if that makes sense. hope that helps mate.
     
  6. subprime

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    I'm trying to have the kick peaking at -10db and build it around that, it might be the amatuer 'mastering' I do after the mixdown maybe, trying to make the whole thing louder :D
     
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    Freek Lets get freeeeeeky

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    have u got izotope ozone? try usin that on ur final mix n should sort it
     
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    Fishy:) Active Member

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    Ur percusiion sounds too muddy, needs more high freuquencies. Sounds like rumble in the backround;P
    But im feeling those moody melodies;P nice work
     
  9. subprime

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    Yeah that's gonna be my focus now, see if I can conquer the high end!

    TBH I thought high end was ghey and you could make good lo-fi garage punk styles on the pc but internetz feedback says no.