Drum & Bass Trawler Fly - Fallen

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by subprime, Oct 31, 2011.

  1. subprime

    subprime Dysjoint

    Joined:
    Feb 2, 2009
    Messages:
    3,087
    Likes Received:
    94
    Location:
    NZ
    Was really enjoying this one but it just ....won't.... urgh.......f'£%k.......s£!t....damn it, I know my idea is lost in here somewhere. Might get some comments if I can and rework it later.
     
  2. Fishy:)

    Fishy:) Active Member

    Joined:
    Feb 18, 2009
    Messages:
    1,245
    Likes Received:
    1
    Location:
    Norway
    Nice guitar man. Drum doesent fit the intro IMO. I think it would sound much better with something else instead that add to the vibe. little strange transition or drop?
    Bass is real smooth man but i think ur snare and kick should have more punch to fit the dirty bass.

    This track is cool tho, original ideas
     
  3. subprime

    subprime Dysjoint

    Joined:
    Feb 2, 2009
    Messages:
    3,087
    Likes Received:
    94
    Location:
    NZ
    Cheers man, I'll look into the drums
     
  4. subprime

    subprime Dysjoint

    Joined:
    Feb 2, 2009
    Messages:
    3,087
    Likes Received:
    94
    Location:
    NZ
  5. quentinhiatus

    quentinhiatus Member

    Joined:
    Jan 6, 2011
    Messages:
    114
    Likes Received:
    4
    I like the idea as well, just fix the things you can hear. Ears never lie :)
     
  6. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

    Joined:
    Aug 6, 2009
    Messages:
    3,971
    Likes Received:
    227
    Location:
    Essex, England
    I'd love to know what goes on in your head man........this is some more Trawlwr randomness at it's finest! Intro wasnt really doing anything for me, but that drop is great, and the bass is utter filth!
     
  7. Balthazaar

    Balthazaar Member

    Joined:
    Jul 14, 2011
    Messages:
    704
    Likes Received:
    24
    O very orignal work man i like it,love the way tune builds up,nice beat,just one thing i think kick need to be more prominent in the mix,other than that great!!
     
  8. subprime

    subprime Dysjoint

    Joined:
    Feb 2, 2009
    Messages:
    3,087
    Likes Received:
    94
    Location:
    NZ
    Thanks guys, I tried to put a bit of effort into this one so I appreciate the listens!
    Haha Fletch, nothing much going on in my head, just start with an idea and see what happens.
     
  9. bansal321

    bansal321 Member

    Joined:
    Sep 8, 2010
    Messages:
    188
    Likes Received:
    1
    im not too sure about the first guitar, sounds a little cheap to me.... but i like the lead guitar parts they sound really professional!... then after the intro all hell breaks loose, an interesting song i have to say!
     
  10. ~CriticalWaves~

    ~CriticalWaves~ Member

    Joined:
    Sep 7, 2010
    Messages:
    361
    Likes Received:
    2
    This gives me a very crazy feeling.
    Drums sound weird in the intro, I think its the hats. I like the western feel of the intro. The drop needs alot of work to0 in my opinion , very interesting tho.
     
  11. subprime

    subprime Dysjoint

    Joined:
    Feb 2, 2009
    Messages:
    3,087
    Likes Received:
    94
    Location:
    NZ
    Yeah I'm not sure about the drop as it relies on the sub hitting around 40hz to balance the kick and give it weight. Sounds great on my headphones and light on my speakers!

    I'm not making tunes that will get played on a decent system so there's probably no point having a sub that low I suppose, but I still love doing it anyway :)