Trawler Fly - Drag

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by subprime, Sep 21, 2011.

  1. subprime

    subprime Dysjoint

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    Feel like I'm making progress in some ways but not painting the big picture yet....so .....any comments, suggestions, pointers, pictures of dwarf tossing, whatever really.

    Cheers!
     
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    I like it. Not sure how the vox fit in, but love the tribal grooves
     
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    Thanks man, yeah sometimes I feel like I'm just adding something because it needs 'something'.

    Haha, tribal, i didn't think of it that way, I just made my own break (or amen?) in Battery and then chopped it up.
     
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    that bass is cool mate, can imagine it in some dirty club at 5 in the morning, and im liking the drums aswell pal.... not the same can be said for the vocals tho
     
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    Dutty drums man! Loving the kinda live and loose vibe they have. Have to agree with what others have said about the vocal though, i think that the vocal could work in the tune, it just needs fucking up a bit if you know what i mean? Its almost too clean and feels a bit out of place with the rest of the track, which has a pretty gritty vibe. Liking it a lot though man, its a bit different which is always good in my book!
     
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    cool, I might just keep the pitched down bits i used later maybe, cheers for the feedback!
     
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    this is really cool man i like it
     
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    pretty abstract piece which isnt bad at all man. got some very well produced parts.
    i think you should strip it back a bit, probably could have made 2 songs from the 'themes' from the song but overall very nice. go with the flow
     
  11. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    I was listening, thinking, meh, its ok....then that bass started, and fuck me, that got my attention!

    Very abstract random piece, but I kinda like it. Think the bass is drowning out alot of your drum work, but a bit of technical EQ'in and that'll be sorted.

    And yeah, ditch the vox