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i don't want to sound harsh but you can't really beat the original, this is just pure randomness lmao but i like the sounds you've made. perhaps you could've used the time to remix it into a diff genre, like minimal techno, or acid techno, or something. i think the thing with the original is it had a lot of soul in it... but, having said all that, the longer i listen, the more it is growing on me. And i just heard the breakbeat you edged in, that sounds wicked. yes, i listen to tracks and give a running commentary as i go lmao sorry. i actually quite like it. but it will never replace the original (doubt anything would)
LMAO running commentary awesome... Its not robert miles.. its something else.. I'll find it, took me ages to find before lol... hang on I found it ( i'm copying your running commentary here )
every tune I make is a builder, it always starts off at its plainest