Traitor - Nomad

[Traitor]

Hey,

This is the first track that I post here and it's nearly finished, it just needs some smaller changes, I think.
I'm not so sure about the mixdown and the intro tbh, so...please tell me your thoughts and opinions, I would love to hear some advice

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Ftraitor-at%2Fnomad

Cheers!

 

[eloy santiago]

sounds good om my headphones, with does not say too much.. if it was my track, i would continue the " distorted,wobbling bass into the part before the break (. e. at 5: 32 ) an have it also do the "rise". ..

 

[Manu Forti]

yeah im not sure about the breaks in the intro myself... the noises around it are sweet (ina dark way) mabye use the drum loop that starts at 40 secs aprox and forget about the break section but not the noises theyre good. basslines got a decent hook but im an old git this stuff all sounds the same to me now so no comment really on how it could be improved... because tbh i dnt listen to this genre. i see nothing wrong with the mastering side on my monitors nothing clashes so all good.. cheers for checking mine ;D

 

[Traitor]

Ok thanks for the feedback guys! ...I think I will work on other things for some days and then go back to this track and finish it