Track im working on

Discussion in 'Production' started by football345, Jun 15, 2010.

  1. football345

    football345 Member

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    Heres a clip of a track im working on. The Voice samples need working on, but put them in there for the idea im using for the final track.

    Just wanted a few views on the track, i keep changing the track because i keep listening to it. So need some outside first time listen views really.

    Any advice on ways to improve would be great, haven't been producing long so tips are always good.

    http://soundcloud.com/football345/wip-jump-up
     
  2. logikz

    logikz I Am Not The King Staff Member

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    nothing much going on in there and the snare is really splashy. but im sure its going to be cool when youre done.
     
  3. Phat_Sam

    Phat_Sam Well-Known Member

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    i like all the ideas that have gone into it i just think production techniques need to be really refined a lot.


    trust me... if ya not been producing that long then try and remix(or remake) this tune in about a year and it'll be sick.
     
  4. football345

    football345 Member

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    Thanks for the replies.

    When im making stuff recently, to me it doesnt sound smooth or full enough when puttin samples from Massive in.

    Anyone got any tips at all?
     
  5. TongueFlap

    TongueFlap Flappin'

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    its all down to practise mate. Just fire up massive and have play. Make a pad, a wobble, pendulum synth, a reese, subfocus detuned synth and so on. The more you learn about the generic sounds the better you will progress. ps, I havnt listened to ur tune as im at work.
     
  6. msmith222

    msmith222 redbeard

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    sorry, also at work so i haven't listened...

    with massive, one thing i have found lately is to try and use all of the oscillators. i would get a good sound with one or two going, but once i started using all of them to make my sounds, they got a lot thicker. i'm sure this is noob stuff, but it helped me. (also, search youtube for "the sound tutor". that guy has a great massive tutorial for dubstep bass that can translate across to dnb as well)

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    here he is...

    http://www.youtube.com/user/thesoundtutor
     
  7. CH3SH

    CH3SH CH3SH - Naphalm Audio

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    Id make the intro drums completely different the the main drums,
    Also create two or three different drum sets and alternate between them all,
    Also try alternating the pattern on every 4th or 8th bar
    Just keep playing around and alternating mate =D