DnB Track feedback

[TuoR]

Hello, this is my 1st released dnb track, so i welcome some feedback

https://soundcloud.com/tuor_music%2Finsight

 

[BattleteK]

Pretty good for your first track! But I don't really like the bass at 1:04 which comes in, its also too loud imo. Maybe you can also cut out some of the vocal chops, cuz u might overused them a bit imo. Anyways it sounds very decent for your first track!

 

[PeriodicDisturbance]

i agree, very good for your first track, sounds are pretty clear and the drums are ok, slightly repeating itself a lot, but the whole thing made sense for what you was doing with it. nice.

 

[TuoR]

thx guys for nice feedback. i definetly agree with battletek - need more focus on arrangement, switching elements, some little changes add