ToxiColora-Fight

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by ToxiColora, Sep 2, 2012.

  1. ToxiColora

    ToxiColora New Member

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    Soo this is one of my first(kinda) DnB tracks.I've been producing for 1 year now and well I feel like I'm improving a lot this summer :bone:
     
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    mixdown need's more work imo. that lead @ 0:43, try to eq lil bit 200hz down to give beat more space. work on your hihats lil more. soundind to straight to my taste :p. adding little lfo to your fast hihats volume should give some nice groove.
     
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    ToxiColora New Member

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    Thanks for the feed back dude :)
     
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    high hates are too high in the mix imo, theres not much groove its very robotic and relentless, maybe thats what youre going for

    not feeling that bass at all, but thats personal preference i suppose

    yeah to be honest this isnt really my thing, so im not sure how helpful i can be.
     
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    ToxiColora New Member

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    Yeah,honestly this song wasnt mean to sound very natural :d
     
  6. Elzerk

    Elzerk 00111100 00110011

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    Give the hats more shuffle, and layer more of them together and lay them into a pattern, now it's just full on 2 different hats and it sounds dull. The bass is way too repetitive and it just sounds, how would i put it, like, it's not planned well enough to fit.