Toxic Exit - Memories - Drum & Bass

[JoeCarlse]

https://soundcloud.com/toxicexit09/memories-toxic-exit-drum-and

16 year old producer from england, could i get some feedback on this?? (Not all good)

 

[DannOmni]

The reverb on the piano is abit to overpowered i thing, beat is great, im missing some low end elements in there. Other than that i like it.

 

[Arseniq]

^Definitely everything he said. Needs some low end, maybe even sub bass thing to fill up room because it just sounds "empty" right now. But when you add that in, the huge reverb will mess with the low, so either automate it or lower it down in general.
On top of that, I feel like it needs some counter melody. The chill feel you're going for is great, but the track needs some progression else it starts to become bland. I feel this has definite potential though, just needs some tweaking. Good job!

 

[Arseniq]

Also kinda makes me think of DnB Minecraft lol

 

[JoeCarlse]

Wow cheers guys thanks for the help, i understand what you mean about the reverb now, i seem to go a bit crazy on the reverb :/

 

[JoeCarlse]

Also kinda makes me think of DnB Minecraft lol

Oh shit yeah i see what you mean! hahahaahah oh my god! i never realised!