Tips for improvement!

[svampskogen]

Hi, i need some tips for improvement and some feedback.
Please listen and give advices
http://soundcloud.com/svampskogen
(know there is a lot to work on)

 

[Krispy]

Hey dude there is a place to put your tracks for feedback, check the top of the page
http://dnbforum.com/forumdisplay.php?21-New-Talent-and-Track-Reviews

 

[logikz]

i listened to the first tune on there and i thought the pad and the beat together was lovely, but i didnt care for the bass synths and the quite random (its because its experimental isnt it) arrangement.

 

[svampskogen]

Thanks for listening yep its kinda experimental, i havent watched like tutorials on youtube how to make a superdupr fat bassline blabla, i have just tried some stuff in the fl studio like the 3xosc wich i make the bass in, and i dont use any loops or such thats why my beat might be a bit weak idk