this is my first track (work in progress) that i am showing the world.

[RTN]

i'm looking for people who are willing to give me some feed back on my beat. warning! it is a required taste.
http://soundcloud.com/grounded/untitled-trip

 

[ColorMeLoud]

It certainly is kinda weird and dark.
I like it. Sounds are pretty clear which is still something I'm trying to achieve.

My biggest issue with your track is it's repetitiveness.
Pretty good aside from that !

 

[barnesy00]

yeh thats pretty good for your first go, something to me sounds out of key though, cant quite figure out what. check out my stuff ive been producing about the same amount of time as you i guess (about 5 months) http://soundcloud.com/zerozero00

 

[miszt]

interesting sound, I like where its going, more variation would be good, esp with that kind of techno influence, the tech elements need to b progressive and morph to really bring it to life imo, nice start tho

 

[Neomind]

sounds very clean, and it's a very good first try for sure!
the bassline (well the sub) reminds me to the tones of this song
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4rpcTB7YMs8
...

 

[djdevz]

neomind why did I watch that video...

about the track - i like it, really good effort for your first attempt..but what is that sound from 0:55 to 1:40? the low scratching sort of sound? its kinda ok..but I wanna know what it is

 

[Fishy:)]

I like it but it is a little repetitiv

 

[luciduk]

big up getting involved!! (finally).. i like this, tis a good vibe ...

intro is nice and eerie. hi hats sound smooth... the drums are really nice and rolling man...

get some feedback to other people as well ! tis a give and take thing try and get feedback to people that have given it to you

its called an "aquired" taste btw man :p

 

[RTN]

I don’t do to well on structuring tracks. if you have any suggestions as how to make it less repetitive please feel free.:lol

 

[luciduk]

switch the drums up man, youve got some nice drum fills in here so after that you could have a thin shaker layer come in, or a percussion loop, or ride cymbals, you could have a drone come in, build up effects, or even a stripped down section where there is less drums and effects but the beat goes steppy or something theres so many possibilites really u got the basis down

im sure i have told you these things before tho :p

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we can always collab on it and finish it if you want mate but u might want to do ur own thing with it

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sorry you have actually switched the drums up a bit, but just need to be more of a "switch" you know?

 

[RTN]

its a vocal sample of a child talking. i think i reversed it, looped it, filtered it and a volume lfo

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tanx m8. now that its actually in writing i can follow it up. and yeh im defo up for a collab version or re mix or what ever lol
i thought u was at collage today?

 

[luciduk]

i am

good thing the college system doesnt block dnbforum or soundcloud eh !