hello blaze, what a nice song with sweet melody. i like the intro a lot. very different to most dnb tracks. pls work on the master sound. when the beat/drums kicks in all other instruments seems to be pressed aside. not quite sure why this is your mix (don't know what equipment u use). try to get rid of this affect, maybe work on the EQ and side-chaining side. also, possibly you could add some short vocals as the final icing on your cake. looking forward to the final track !!