this aint drum n bass

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by T Leaf, May 7, 2009.

  1. T Leaf

    T Leaf Neighbourhood Sickhead

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    http://www.zshare.net/audio/59725263379a8675/

    please excuse me for this one, its not a drum n bass track, its just something i have been workin on recently with another artist. i thought i'd let you lot have the first critique as i respect a lot of artists here.

    It's an idea to make a beefed up version a track that he had, asked the guy and he sent me the acapella.

    cheers for any help!

    The Leaf
     
  2. T Leaf

    T Leaf Neighbourhood Sickhead

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    bump for crits
     
  3. Borf™

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    Feeling the production man. Nice bassline. Drums could be a little harder, but that's my preference.

    The vocals are horrible though. They fit nice, but the singing/shouting/rapping is piss poor. Horrible choice of topic, crap lyrics and rubbish flow. And it's a joke who calls people "tossers" yet from what he's on about, he's the tosser for fucking people up.

    But from you're side, it's all good man. Find better people to collab with though (y)

    Edit: listening again, really digging the production.
     
  4. T Leaf

    T Leaf Neighbourhood Sickhead

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    nice one for checking it out brofski, i think i need to learn more on the side of drum productions too, my next voyage i think.

    big upz man
     
  5. The Hex

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    i agree, the production's awesome. nice job with that T. the synth that starts in the beginning is hella good. nice use of beeps and bloops too. nice job man :D
     
  6. T Leaf

    T Leaf Neighbourhood Sickhead

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    thanks hex, it was a tough one to crack!

    biguppage!
     
  7. detonate-dj

    detonate-dj sexdrugs&rockinthedole

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    really nice this i think, alot of tracks like this can be boring to listen thru, yet ya kept it interesting and easy to listen to, the bassline on the chorus is spot on aswell, really good track..
     
  8. T Leaf

    T Leaf Neighbourhood Sickhead

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    nice one detonate, yeh i was going for that. i felt alot of these tracks can get really repetitive so i thought i'd break off the beaten path a bit.

    :slick:
     
  9. Viperdnb

    Viperdnb On his way.

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    Yeh sick little tune mate, loving that bass, the production is amazing.
     
  10. detonate-dj

    detonate-dj sexdrugs&rockinthedole

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    aye rights, ya done good with it i think, 4 mins of the same bassline and drums is very boring, keep it up