Thin n Crispy - Ashleys break

[Thin and crispy]

http://soundcloud.com/thin-and-crispy/ashleys-break

Short sample of a track i started, needs alot of work just wandering if people are feeling it so far and if theres any critiscisms, usual drill

 

[T Leaf]

i like how different this is mate, very progressive, i cant say more than that, needs more so i can read a little more into the composition. but nice idea

 

[subprime]

Sounds alright, a bit like an intro at the minute. The break alone sounds a little weak, I guess you'll be adding more underneath.
Like T-leaf, need to hear a bit more to see where you're heading with it.

 

[Thin and crispy]

yer im always kinda second guessing myself cos im not quite there yet to in having the confidence to say like "this sounds good" if u get what i mean? so i just thought id put my idea on a plate and let people pick at it