Thin and Crispy - Summer Sky

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Thin and crispy, Jun 10, 2011.

  1. Thin and crispy

    Thin and crispy Active Member

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    Adding some reverb to the snare atm. All feedback appreciated!
     
  2. Stiffer

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    lovely ambience in this, the beat sounds a little too rigid for this style, needs more incidental hits on the off beats and maybe change the hi hats every now and then just to help it flow and keep it less repetitve.. but its a cool start man..
     
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    updated, cheers for the feedback
     
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    Nice chilled atmosphere, i dig it. But i agree with stiffer bout the drums.
     
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    beatiful pads in the intro bruv. get a tad more high end on them and they will be fucking LUSH!

    Yeah... beat is a tad too sporadic for the style... not to say its not good! maybe layer a hi passed "think break" under there?

    snare needs more high end snap!

    proper chilled mate. really diggin it!
     
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    Great intro mate, loving those pads! The vocal fits in perfectly, bass is also good. I do agree with the other guys that your drums need some variations/modifications though. Keep it up!
     
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    like the drums in the intro and the break? oooorrrr what? like instramental style?
     
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    added a timed comment :)

    as i said they're interesting beats man, some more synths and instruments could be added into it but i'm loving that style man!
     
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    i had more in but i didn't save it when i was working on it, right from the start and after a few hours my pc crashed for some god forsaken reason... i just wanted to get it back together asap
     
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    dayum, thats unlucky! but its good work never the less
     
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