Thin and Crispy - Dream

[Thin and crispy]

A track a made quite a while ago! Its very messy tbh wanting opinions etc, basicaly is it worth me re-doing the whole thing and cleaning it up, how i could improve it, maybe change a few bits here n there! usual drill
All comments appreciated good or bad

http://soundcloud.com/thin-and-crispy/dream

Thin

p.s. i know the drums are realy quite lol =/

 

[Alexi]

really like the synth parts, maybe beef them up later in the process, and a bit more melodic change, cos that one bass note does get a little boring

I think you know about the drums, liven them up with a break over the top and definately layer some more to give a bigger sound

tbh mate I think your a bit over critcal in what you say about the track, nice ideas just needs some work on the execution

 

[Thin and crispy]

cheers man, maybe i am over criticle >< deffiantly gonna have another stab at this 1 tho i think, i made it months ago ill try an apply to it what ive learnt since then if u know what i mean.

 

[kama]

I think more texture on the beats would go a long way, maybe a careful use of some break could do it.

The synth sound is cool but the melody needs some change-ups, like a chorus in a pop song.