Thin and Crispy - Ambient soundzz

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  1. Thin and crispy

    Thin and crispy Active Member

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    http://soundcloud.com/thin-and-crispy/ambient-soundzz

    Descriptions on the track page...

    opinions and critisisms good or bad welcomed as always, again im still learning and just making to what i feel/learn as i progress so fire away!

    Cheers, Thin.

    p.s. sorry for the low volume i dont why it happens :(( sounded fine in reason/audacity/wmp after converting to mp3.
    p.p.s im using a standard arpeggio from maelstrom and it seems to dropping off every now n then, any idea how to sort it? could i make set it to 1 shot and then just keep repeating the first few bars?
     
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    If you want a real ambient track you should consider loosing 'em drums.The overall song sounds nice except some chords that sound kind of...dissonant.Also you should consider remastering the entire beat,give it a little more flavor,lower the volume on some sounds(the plucks,for example)and add some other effects,like panning and stuff.Good luck.
     
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    cheers man, any1 else? :D