Thin and Crispy - Alien Life

[Thin and crispy]

https://soundcloud.com/thin-and-crispy%2Falien-lifeform

Ok, i uploaded the intro/drop to this track a week or so ago, but now ive got a full track (in terms of length, at least! ) anyways, i made some alterations n stuff... let me know what you think, if it could use anything, something taken away etc, and most of all the vocal sample in the second break - does it work? sound ok?

Thanks for all any feedback, good or bad it all counts
/Thin

 

[Dj Methodist]

Nice intro mate. spooky and intersting.
I think the lead that comes in just before the drop is too loud and maybe a little dry-reverb could be useful here...
The drums are loud and nice. maybe chop the pattern and put variations at the end of the 8th or 16th more?
I love that bell ride that comes in at 1:35. is it a break or a sample? I hear it a lot in like dillinjas tracks and have wanted it for a while!

 

[Thin and crispy]

if its what i think you think, its a break

 

[Mr Fletch]

Much much much better than your other piece I just listened to and commented on!