Thin and Crispy - A Lost Samurai v1

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  1. Thin and crispy

    Thin and crispy Active Member

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    PLS CHECK THE ONE ON DNBSHARE, V3 :)



    Feedback please, all appreciated good or bad... let me know what you think :)
    V3 new kick, changed the hi's = http://dnbshare.com/download/ALostSamuraidifferentkick3.mp3.html

    Mike
     
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  2. Dave.

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    Solid track man!

    Love the pad and drums too,
    i don't like the lfo on the sub, it's too hard/fast
    try to reduce the amount and use a 3/16 rate,

    anyway...nice job :)
     
  3. Catchem

    Catchem mwerp much?

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    real chill track i like it the only thing is the kick sounds a bit to bouncy for me and the bass was clipping at some points but i'm not sure if that was intentional or not
     
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    i love the lil seagull/seaside fx lol...
    but yeh the lfo is too quick n bouncy,
    but some nice atmospheric sounds goin on
     
  5. Thin and crispy

    Thin and crispy Active Member

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    ok, so less wobble, thought it myself but a second opinion said it sounded better =x anyways, cheers guys :)

    ---------- Post added at 14:05 ---------- Previous post was at 12:20 ----------

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  6. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Nice atmospheric intro dude, digging the birds and stuff. Not sure about the punchy kick in the intro, maybe something a little more subtle would work better. Even when it drops it sounds out of place, everything else sounds real mellow and chill.

    Overall a very nice chillout track, just that kick thats bothering me....
     
  7. Mrachniot

    Mrachniot Macedonian Drum & Bass

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    interesting track ... just add a lil more vocals that were in the start ...
     
  8. subprime

    subprime Dysjoint

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    Like this one a lot. Love the sub work. I didn't hear the first version, but this sounds great.

    Agree with Fletch about the kick in the intro, does sound a bit boxy. Might give the first drop a bit more impact if it was softer.

    Very nice, bass makes it for me.
     
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    ill try it with a filter on the intro and another with different drum, cheers :)
     
  10. RUSSLA

    RUSSLA DNBF Monarch

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    Like the style of this track man - Agree with the kick, i recon a better sample could be found to fit better and soften up on the intro.. i think personally the high end has a bit too much going on with the hats and the white noises sound sweeps so often, less is more ;) Just my thoughts tho

    All the other elements are realy cool man, like what is going on with the fxs a lot!!
     
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    soundin good bruva agree with the kick kinda soundin funny. I would personally like to hear some good strong Atmos in there aswell. and the drums could change a little moar they sound good but they need a little moar variation.
    But all in all good chune man!
     
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    Thin and crispy Active Member

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    cheers for the reply m8 but which are you refering too?
     
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    Wow thats some interesting drums:) pretty cool! i wish u turned up the volume of the pads just a little bit
     
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