The Warning (wip) - Cynical Outlook

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Cynical Outlook, Nov 22, 2011.

  1. Cynical Outlook

    Cynical Outlook New Member

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    New track im working on, not mixed down or mastered yet still a headphone job. After listening a million times it still sounds like it needs something more to me. Any feedback is appreciated
     
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    Nice wallowing sound in the intro, it gets even better at 2:30.
    Few things that struck my ear, the ''drop'' doesn't hit at all (1:01 aswell as 3:55), maybe spice that up a bit. Also u could add some more drum shuffle tho I rly like the snare + tambourine / shaker thing.
    Also that sparkly sound at 3:20 or so is rly nice, maybe add a few of those at random in the main part since that runs for so long (1:02 up to 2:26).

    All in all it's a good track, has a trippy feel to it now that i think about it, maybe a bit short on the sub end but I'm listening on shitty speakers so that may be why.

    Hope this was helpful. :)
     
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    Thanx for taking the time to listen man, big ups for the feedback much appreciated (y)